An attention getting pre-headline works well here
to setup your main headline. Just a couple of
lines - no more than half-way across...
Introduce The Problem You Will Solve
Let your reader know that you understand their problem and how it feels to have that problem, or to want to achieve a particular goal. Build empathy with them by telling exactly how it feels to have that problem, or to want that goal.
Don't just tell them you understand - show them by describing their actual feelings!
Emphasize that their problem could get a lot worse, or how their frustration will build if they don't do something about it. Paint an ugly picture.
Pre-sell Your Solution
You're pre-selling. Your goal may be to get the visitor to your sales page, or just to get them to opt-in to a notification list or download a special report that will further sell your offer.
You might :
If your goal is to get an opt-in...
[PASTE YOUR AUTORESPONDER OPT-IN FORM CODE HERE]
If your goal is to get your visitor to your sales page...
[Link Directly to Sales Page]